Asking permission for filming

Here's a copy of the letter which I wrote to my friend Tasha's mum and dad asking if I could film outside of their house.

Dear Mr and Mrs Pretot,

 

Hello, I am studying media at A Level and I am currently filming a trailer for a horror film. I am writing to ask if I could possibly film outside of your house as the exterior would really fit in well with the horror genre. I would really appreciate your permission as it would really help me out.

Thank you,

Emily Rose